one of my very few non rhyming poems |
 Oct 19 2004, 08:01 PM
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Eternal Syn  Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000  |
I don’t understand why I let you go
You were always there for me But I never noticed Perhaps I should’ve paid more attention To someone like you I wish I could’ve said it to you then When you were still at my side I guess I should never take things for granted At least not anymore… |
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Oct 20 2004, 03:56 PM
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 Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
Words taken straight out the heart of regret...
I like it. It's very honest and straight-forward, with a tone that fits it all very well. |
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Cloud_X one of my very few non rhyming poems Oct 19 2004, 08:01 PM
Heathasm this is very simple, but well put. Its deffinately... Oct 20 2004, 05:36 PM wayne nice. means something. i like poems like that. Oct 20 2004, 06:50 PM Cloud_X thanks you guys i really appreciate the feedback. Oct 20 2004, 07:22 PM
dispn0ygonekrazy ay man good job on this mayn i like it Oct 20 2004, 07:48 PM |
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