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Oct 13 2004, 11:19 PM
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![]() Will write poetry for sex! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
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Oct 17 2004, 04:41 PM
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![]() Will write poetry for sex! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
QUOTE([X) poised,Oct 17 2004, 12:38 PM] um. so like. what's fake poetry? shel silverstein writes about TOTALLY different things, but its still considered poetry. anways .... its really good. it goes really deep. What they mean by 'real' might be how raw in emotion it is. Maybe it's my poems syntax and usage of different things like imagery and metaphor. Or maybe they meant 'real' the same way the word 'deep' would be used. In my opinion, anything and everything is poetry. Yes, I agree, Silverstein writes little rhymes that are considered poetry. But I guess it can also depend on your definition of poetry. I'll now quote myself from what I wrote in my little writing notebook... "I don't write poetry..I AM poetry." Eh, I'm bored, so why don't I just show you my notebook, just for kicks. ![]() I write backwards...The bottom picture is the back, but that's where I start. Anyway, I'm glad you like my poem. Maybe the ones who made that comment can clarify what they mean? ::Shrugs:: I don't know. Man, what a rather large post. Why do I have to be so damn random at times? |
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MasteRxKiD Riding Away Oct 13 2004, 11:19 PM
[X]poised I like that. I felt like i was in my lit class, tr... Oct 13 2004, 11:25 PM
Heathasm nice, i love inspirational moments, they are hard ... Oct 13 2004, 11:57 PM
MasteRxKiD Thanks...I worked on it earlier tonight, and I had... Oct 14 2004, 12:12 AM
dreamerOi QUOTE(Heathasm @ Oct 13 2004, 11:57 PM)nice, ... Oct 14 2004, 12:37 AM
MasteRxKiD Wow, such high praise.
I'm beginning to think ... Oct 14 2004, 12:58 AM
omg_melface [bump]
yeah, I like it. =] <3 Oct 15 2004, 09:02 PM
dispn0ygonekrazy lolz good job Oct 15 2004, 10:15 PM
MasteRxKiD Nothing in particular, guys?
Damn, I thought I had... Oct 15 2004, 11:33 PM
Cloud_X QUOTE(MasteRxKiD @ Oct 13 2004, 11:19 PM)My l... Oct 15 2004, 11:43 PM
MasteRxKiD It's actually pretty simple, but I'm glad ... Oct 15 2004, 11:48 PM
Cloud_X Oh, I see. Such meaning in such a short line. lol ... Oct 15 2004, 11:51 PM
MasteRxKiD Eh? No, that line had nothing to do with crying i... Oct 15 2004, 11:53 PM
Cloud_X hahah I kno. I was just talking about how crying i... Oct 15 2004, 11:56 PM
scleex88 shit joe, thats a nice poem.
haha, i feel like im ... Oct 16 2004, 12:00 AM
MasteRxKiD Thanks, dude.
I'm flattered that you guys find... Oct 16 2004, 12:17 AM
omg_melface QUOTE(MasteRxKiD @ Oct 13 2004, 10:19 PM)The ... Oct 16 2004, 11:29 AM
dispn0ygonekrazy aww u two lovw birds lol what would mel do without... Oct 16 2004, 12:04 PM
x emo screamo x Wow.
You write awesome. Everything was so detaile... Oct 17 2004, 09:18 AM
[X]poised QUOTE(x emo screamo x @ Oct 17 2004, 9:18 AM)... Oct 17 2004, 03:38 PM
dispn0ygonekrazy BUMP IT JOE!!! hey i write backwards t... Oct 17 2004, 07:51 PM
MasteRxKiD Damn, that's insane.
I guess I could read some... Oct 17 2004, 08:12 PM![]() ![]() |