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 Oct 13 2004, 11:19 PM
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 Will write poetry for sex!  Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600  |
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Oct 15 2004, 11:43 PM
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Eternal Syn Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 |
QUOTE(MasteRxKiD @ Oct 13 2004, 11:19 PM) My lips, softly outlined with caught tears began to read - That is possibly my favorite line. Such detail. Honestly I like it but I'm going to have to reread it several times before I can completely comprehend what it means. |
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MasteRxKiD Riding Away Oct 13 2004, 11:19 PM
[X]poised I like that. I felt like i was in my lit class, tr... Oct 13 2004, 11:25 PM Heathasm nice, i love inspirational moments, they are hard ... Oct 13 2004, 11:57 PM MasteRxKiD Thanks...I worked on it earlier tonight, and I had... Oct 14 2004, 12:12 AM dreamerOi QUOTE(Heathasm @ Oct 13 2004, 11:57 PM)nice, ... Oct 14 2004, 12:37 AM MasteRxKiD Wow, such high praise.
I'm beginning to think ... Oct 14 2004, 12:58 AM omg_melface [bump]
yeah, I like it. =] <3 Oct 15 2004, 09:02 PM dispn0ygonekrazy lolz good job Oct 15 2004, 10:15 PM MasteRxKiD Nothing in particular, guys?
Damn, I thought I had... Oct 15 2004, 11:33 PM MasteRxKiD It's actually pretty simple, but I'm glad ... Oct 15 2004, 11:48 PM Cloud_X Oh, I see. Such meaning in such a short line. lol ... Oct 15 2004, 11:51 PM MasteRxKiD Eh? No, that line had nothing to do with crying i... Oct 15 2004, 11:53 PM Cloud_X hahah I kno. I was just talking about how crying i... Oct 15 2004, 11:56 PM scleex88 shit joe, thats a nice poem.
haha, i feel like im ... Oct 16 2004, 12:00 AM MasteRxKiD Thanks, dude.
I'm flattered that you guys find... Oct 16 2004, 12:17 AM omg_melface QUOTE(MasteRxKiD @ Oct 13 2004, 10:19 PM)The ... Oct 16 2004, 11:29 AM dispn0ygonekrazy aww u two lovw birds lol what would mel do without... Oct 16 2004, 12:04 PM x emo screamo x Wow.
You write awesome. Everything was so detaile... Oct 17 2004, 09:18 AM [X]poised QUOTE(x emo screamo x @ Oct 17 2004, 9:18 AM)... Oct 17 2004, 03:38 PM MasteRxKiD QUOTE([X)poised,Oct 17 2004, 12:38 PM] um. so... Oct 17 2004, 04:41 PM dispn0ygonekrazy BUMP IT JOE!!! hey i write backwards t... Oct 17 2004, 07:51 PM
MasteRxKiD Damn, that's insane.
I guess I could read some... Oct 17 2004, 08:12 PM |
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