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 Oct 15 2004, 12:28 AM
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Eternal Syn  Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000  |
Drowned in your thought
Curiosity was all you brought All I wished was to get to know you I hope this is what you wish too We’re both too shy We both try to say hi But all we do is walk past each other I hope that I get a chance to talk to her I hope we get the chance to talk: Just us two Just us, you and me; no crew Your charisma is what attracted me to you I hope in due time that I can call you my boo Because seeing you and watching the way you move makes me quiver I shiver with the thought of you and the way you deliver Your style, your beauty and your attitude With these words I would compliment you with love and gratitude So please don’t say you’d rather be friends Because that would be the end That line is a wound to the heart Because letting you go, I know would be hard It was made by me and one of my friends. |
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Oct 15 2004, 11:42 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
lol i see cloud man lol ur funny i noe the my boo shyt and stuff meaning they're talking about the gf but cmon now mayn MY BOO..?!?!!? lol im sure there are other words you can rhymne it with
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Cloud_X Shyness Oct 15 2004, 12:28 AM
MasteRxKiD I find it a little odd to work on a piece like tha... Oct 15 2004, 03:44 AM Cloud_X I don't know really. We just kinda comprimised... Oct 15 2004, 06:56 PM dispn0ygonekrazy again man with the MY BOO! i hate that word sr... Oct 15 2004, 07:40 PM MasteRxKiD Yeah, I'm annoyed of that word as well.
I just... Oct 15 2004, 08:45 PM Cloud_X I didn't mean for it to actually incorperate w... Oct 15 2004, 11:37 PM MasteRxKiD Yeah, like...'The one for whom my heart stays ... Oct 15 2004, 11:45 PM Cloud_X hahah iono it was the first thing that popped into... Oct 15 2004, 11:46 PM dispn0ygonekrazy its not that u need a rhyming book its just u need... Oct 15 2004, 11:59 PM Cloud_X I think I got what you said. What you're sayin... Oct 16 2004, 12:01 AM sweetxsimplicity Nice poem, I love it. Oct 16 2004, 12:03 AM dispn0ygonekrazy uhhh close sloud lol but not really what im saying... Oct 16 2004, 12:20 AM
Cloud_X Well I understand it now since I just took a showe... Oct 16 2004, 12:40 AM |
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