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 Oct 15 2004, 10:50 PM
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waking up in the dead of silence
looking around for pieces of a past feeling hopeless, theres nothing to find built up with rage im a bull seeing red going crazy in the dead of this silence my mind losing control, the circuit breaks time has stopped, feeling so scared cant move my body, cant move my soul falling to the floor closing my eyes in a deep sleep in my cold surrounding opening my eyes realizing what happened trapt in my own mind time hasnt moved the dead of silence was nothing but a trick played by ones mind and imagination tending to lose track of time and motion the mind is a cautious place if not used right my writing piece no title |
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Oct 15 2004, 11:29 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
what i mean by that
falling to the floor closing my eyes in a deep sleep in my cold surrounding opening my eyes realizing what happened trapt in my own mind time hasnt moved when yur lost in your own mind ex. day dreaming it seems like time has gone by so fast but waking up ex "opening my eyes realizing what happened" you know now that it may seem like a long time has gone by but time hasnt bidged a bit.. hope u understand it more now lol joe hmm that should be the title then lol |
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dispn0ygonekrazy no title Oct 15 2004, 10:50 PM
dreamerOi QUOTE(dispn0ygonekrazy @ Oct 15 2004, 10:50 P... Oct 15 2004, 11:20 PM MasteRxKiD I've got a title for you.
'The Dead of Si... Oct 15 2004, 11:23 PM dreamerOi oh woops what i meant to say was hmm.. haha. i can... Oct 15 2004, 11:43 PM dispn0ygonekrazy lol no problem Oct 15 2004, 11:44 PM Cloud_X Interesting piece as always. You seem to have a lo... Oct 15 2004, 11:59 PM dispn0ygonekrazy lol different sides are good show u can write some... Oct 16 2004, 12:18 AM
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