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Ekay
post Oct 15 2004, 12:28 AM
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Drowned in your thought
Curiosity was all you brought
All I wished was to get to know you
I hope this is what you wish too

We’re both too shy
We both try to say hi
But all we do is walk past each other
I hope that I get a chance to talk to her

I hope we get the chance to talk: Just us two
Just us, you and me; no crew
Your charisma is what attracted me to you
I hope in due time that I can call you my boo

Because seeing you and watching the way you move makes me quiver
I shiver with the thought of you and the way you deliver
Your style, your beauty and your attitude
With these words I would compliment you with love and gratitude

So please don’t say you’d rather be friends
Because that would be the end
That line is a wound to the heart
Because letting you go, I know would be hard

It was made by me and one of my friends.
 
 
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dispn0ygonekrazy
post Oct 15 2004, 07:40 PM
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again man with the MY BOO! i hate that word srry i just dont think a writing piece should have that word but thats just my opinion other than that good job have you tried writing something less rhymable??
 

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