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the apology
dreamerOi
post Oct 14 2004, 11:55 PM
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aiko Nakamura at your service
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yeup its the apology.&of course the past continues haha.

i apologize,
for letting those eyes enter mine
helping each other see through the smog
being able to be the reason you smile
your teeth, they belong to a mouse
they arent gorgeous but i love them.
you might have gone from prince charming,
to the hunchback of notredam
but what matters?
im already entangled in this labrinth, this maze
inescapable with traps being exposed by every step
making me vulernable& hurt by each second
but i keep going knowing theres a chance
a chance at the prize
but i stop almost every hour to breathe
to take a good look at myself
making sure i'm hurt
but when i'm not i come for more
begging for more glass to pierce me
and of course when you dont
i force it upon myself
making you watch the pain
&for hoping youll hear my heartfelt screeches,
i apologize.
 
 
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Heathasm
post Oct 15 2004, 12:00 AM
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creepy heather
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oh wow, this is great, part of it reminds me of a poem by shakespear that i heard once...good job, this poem seems very unique to me, for an apology
 

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