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 Oct 14 2004, 09:51 PM
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Hmm been really out of it so sorry if this is another failure but i haven't posted in a while so just decided to
Wonder why I get you go When I gave everything I could Yet this sorrow is eating my body slowly disturbing my sleep, my thinking, and my appetite Letting you go into someone elses arms makes me sad For I know it won't be my arms Why must I be the one to suffer Why must I take all the pain while you smile and walk down lovely memory lane Without you I'm just a lonely no one |
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Oct 14 2004, 10:17 PM
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 Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
You don't have to be dark...You could try using metaphors instead.
That's always a lot of fun. |
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rainnydaiis Without you Oct 14 2004, 09:51 PM
MasteRxKiD I like the theme...
I don't really like the po... Oct 14 2004, 10:07 PM rainnydaiis aiitez the thing about me is... i cant be dark.. b... Oct 14 2004, 10:08 PM
rainnydaiis ok ill give it a shot and ill post it up if it suc... Oct 14 2004, 10:18 PM |
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