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 Oct 13 2004, 09:10 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer*  Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134  |
looking up in the sky for a new day to come
seeing the same faces and the same old thing i see everything and what revolves around me divided into a world between happiness and hate trapping their minds like hiding behind a shadow escaping feelings and wounds, that leaves a scar the anthem of hope going around in our heads an unexplaining melody that calms our minds the song of the new children coming to our life restoring what was once happy and what was hate bringing back our pride to enjoy life once again we sing the melody of our dying hope |
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Oct 14 2004, 09:43 PM
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 Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
That's much better...You should edit your original post.
QUOTE trapping his minds hiding behind a shadow, that... That part's a bit awkward...did you type it up wrong? |
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dispn0ygonekrazy anthem Oct 13 2004, 09:10 PM
waccoon *claps*
Awesome. Oct 14 2004, 10:56 AM TangoMango wow. your really talented! that was good Oct 14 2004, 12:11 PM dispn0ygonekrazy thnx for the feedback heres the same thing but pro... Oct 14 2004, 08:50 PM dreamerOi i dig it haha im YOUR number one fan haha. . Oct 15 2004, 07:43 PM dispn0ygonekrazy ooh yeah i typed it wrong it was suppose to be tra... Oct 15 2004, 07:44 PM MasteRxKiD Oh, okay, makes more sense.
Good line, BTW. Oct 15 2004, 08:42 PM
fallingstar awesome! bravo ;] Dec 26 2006, 07:37 PM |
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