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 Oct 13 2004, 10:16 PM
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te quiero  Group: Banned Posts: 2,586 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 14,678  |
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-melissa take my hand i'll guide you to a place of wonderment you've never known before follow me run your hand down my whole body give me that chilled sensation part your lips i'll take you with me through this trip to just one different land coming closer i beckon you with just one finger as you linger close behind oh, a ride just a joyride through a place, deep into where we've never gone before light it up those candles that we've saved for so many other nights special night this is the one that you've been waiting for playing chess you are my playpiece and i'll treat you as the pawn you are. follow me.. |
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Oct 13 2004, 11:12 PM
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 Amberific. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,913 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,772 |
QUOTE(xquizit @ Oct 13 2004, 11:09 PM) oooh, thats sexy. Trés sexy. Great poem. I like the imagery in your words. |
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[X]poised lust Oct 13 2004, 10:16 PM
rainnydaiis hmm very interesting =P i loved what you did with ... Oct 13 2004, 10:25 PM [X]poised thank you =]
haha. i love that word, exotic. Oct 13 2004, 10:31 PM rainnydaiis yes same here... exotic =P
you write very very ex... Oct 13 2004, 10:44 PM stephinika ooh, me likes. and exotic is an awesome word that ... Oct 13 2004, 10:48 PM xquizit oooh, thats sexy. Oct 13 2004, 11:09 PM MasteRxKiD Oh the seduction and lust...
Very cleverly written... Oct 13 2004, 11:17 PM [X]poised thanks you guys. Oct 13 2004, 11:21 PM
Cloud_X QUOTE(MasteRxKiD @ Oct 13 2004, 11:17 PM)Oh t... Oct 15 2004, 12:14 AM |
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