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[LoST SouL]

hey hey i rote a poem wanna kno wat u guys think... have ne poems urself submit them here... i kno its kinda depressin n a lil scary but watcha think

The Child
A tear is a cry from the soul
It is a calling from the child within
The child that's scared and terrified
of Death's Angel
The Dark Angel that hovers over the child
And sucks the happiness from our lives
Happiness is unseen
It is a no exsistant joy
The child within does not know happiness
It knows fear, trama
dispair, depression
and pain.
The child does not simle
A simle is something the soul does not know
Our souls cry out for help
Our hearts are blackened by murder
The child is enclosed
In a sea of darkness
It sees shadows
Emmitting from the dark enclosed hallway
The shadows from the past, present, and future
It scares the child
The child crys out for help
In pain
It is killing our soul
It eats us alive
We suffer
The child cannot run
cannot move
The child is immobile
Repressed by the thoughts within
Love and hatred is corrupting us
Corupting the child within
We cry
The Fallen Angels encircle the child
They reach out
Suicide
Blood is flowing from the childs viens
We die
We beg for help
Tears flow from our eyes
We speak
but hear nothing
We have sight
but see nothing
We are all alone
in a vast vast place of darkness
We grow weak
We want to die
But the child never dies
So we suffer

[LoST SouL]

the feeling

no one to tell
i feel so alone
im hurting inside
im crying
the feeling is evil
the feeling is pain
it is eating me alive
why do i feel this way?
why cant i ever be happy?
what is wrong with me?
some one please make the hurt go away
i feel like such a child
so lost and scared
im lost in my own world of confusion and misery
so many people to listen but no one to tell
their're all ears
but i am out of words
i dont know what this feeling is any more
it is a sting
a stab in the heart
o how i wish i could tell some one
o how i wish i could describe this imense pain i feel
i am sheltered
in a cave so dark and grey
i cant answer with a straight face
tears are always in my eyes
it is killing me slowly
i feel it in every part of my body
does anyone understand?
will anyone understand?
why am i sufferein like this?
will it ever go away?
it is all my fault
i created a monster that as taken over my soul
why cant i control it
its so hard
so hard to subdue the feeling
the monster must die
it is not healthy
it is not safe
it is not good
it is evil
im suffuring
it is emotional abuse
it is the cuts the go deeper and deeper into my skin
the blood in which i bath in
happyness is the key
happyness is the answer
to the problems in which i am the cause
the cause shud be eliminated
for pain depression and sorry
is all i find
it is not a wonderland
but a place of misery
a place of death
a place of sorrow
my life is an abyss
an abyss of thins unsought for