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i hate you, i hate your eyes
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post Oct 13 2004, 07:58 PM
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(don't make assumptions about what this is about)

i hate your eyes
-melissa

you make me weaker by the moment
with those eyes that pierce like knives
you're killing me slowly with your eyes
i feel i'll need nine lives

those deep black, dark, and probing eyes
i detest your defiling stare
the ways you look into my soul
make it seem like you might care

i know you don't and neither do i
you disgusting piece of trash
if i could i'd throw you out
you're infesting, like a rash

you're a scar of who i am
and who i'll never be
i can't tell you how much hate
is being thrown to you from me
 
 
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post Oct 13 2004, 08:58 PM
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nicely done i wrote something similar relating to ur poem but good job
 

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[X]poised   i hate you   Oct 13 2004, 07:58 PM
dispn0ygonekrazy   nicely done i wrote something similar relating to ...   Oct 13 2004, 08:58 PM
PinkTrash   Whoa, a lot of expression there. :)   Oct 13 2004, 09:07 PM


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