fair lights on a southern terrace Options

[Heathasm]

Fair lights, on a southern terrace
Hide obscurity, rusted into the dance floor,
As their luminosity spreads for a distance-
Potent remarks that scale “x” embedded into the earth

Ink spilt from these outlets
Paved onto the stage-
A black-showy blood with cancer-
Vines climbing up your body
Until it reaches your lips

Baby, your veins are under my fingers
On these grounds, when we dance
Under the fair light spreading
Across the southern terrace

[dreamerOi]

this poem is so woww i cant even think of the right word. i say woww. as the masterxkid said your a great writer.