Lost And Delirious, Kinda depressing... Options

[SMoOnaLwAyZ]

I wrote this poem as homework for my English class. I guess its alright to be depress sometimes. I dunno...


Lost And Delirious
A Poem By:
SMoOnaLwAyZ
07292004

~*~

Too tight, can't breath.
Too quite, can't hear.
Too dark, can't see.

Sitting at the corner
In the darkness
With my head bent over
As my tears flows down my face.
Why do I feel this way?
Why?

Here I am.
Thinking.
Crying.
Dying.

A room full of people but
I'm still alone.
A child that is Lost forever.

No one to turn to.
No one to talk to.
No one to be with you.
There's no one.

I thought I found someone.
Thought it would last long.
Thought it was with him where I belong.
But it was over,
It was all gone.

Maybe it was a lie.
Maybe it wasn't real.
Maybe I was being Delirious.
I guess this is really serious.

But here I am sitting at
The corner in the darkness.
Thinking why do I feel like this.
A feeling of being...

Lost And Delirious.

[TheSilenceInDict...]

It is alright to be depressed.

I like your style and pacing. Not bad.
You should consider writing outside of class assignments.

BTW, you might want to resize your sig. Too wide.