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post Oct 10 2004, 09:05 AM
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Haywood Bay

If you like the way I treat you then come out to Haywood Bay,
But if you like to be abused, then with him I guess you'll stay.
They say that nice guys finish last, but that is just cliche,
So if you want to try and make a change then come with me today.

I'm not sure who put it in your head; this idea of being low,
But whoever it was doesn't have a heart, and should realize that you glow.
You radiate your beauty; it's such a magnificent show,
But you never seem to take my word, you always "have to go".

You ask me why I try so hard, and I answer subtle and true,
I have no other motives, no permiscuous things to do.
It's really all quite simple, I want to take care of you,
But I know that will never happen, you'll never let me through.

So I leave this offer on the table should you really want to say,
"I feel like I am happy, I look forward to the day".
Just call on me to pine for you, and fight your troubles away,
You know where you can find me...down by Haywood Bay.


[Footnote: I live in a place called Haywood Bay...and this is written for a certain person who never seems to give me a chance. Enjoy.]
 
 
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post Oct 10 2004, 09:53 PM
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I'll post more often so I can get added to your magnificent list, Joe.

I'll put up some of my abstracts later. Thank you for the pluses, everyone.

And the title isnt' copyrighted...sell it to an emo band if you want wink.gif
 

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CrackedRearView   Haywood Bay   Oct 10 2004, 09:05 AM
MasteRxKiD   Damn, very well done, Justin. Seems like a poem w...   Oct 10 2004, 01:01 PM
omg_melface   Sounds like a wonderful emo song title. I love it...   Oct 10 2004, 01:41 PM
jambaJUICE   wow. hehe. it sounds like an advertisement. -- ...   Oct 10 2004, 03:04 PM
ashesinthefall   thats really good   Oct 10 2004, 09:37 PM
CrackedRearView   I'll post more often so I can get added to you...   Oct 10 2004, 09:53 PM
MasteRxKiD   Just make the request and I'll gladly add you....   Oct 11 2004, 12:11 AM
CrackedRearView   Thanks for adding me, I'll post some more of m...   Oct 12 2004, 09:27 PM
mSz_dOrk_anGeL   <3 Its wonderful.   Oct 15 2004, 09:53 PM
dreamerOi   mang you write good poems& short storys. i dig...   Oct 15 2004, 11:45 PM
Azarel   Beautifully written; you take a subject which is e...   Aug 9 2005, 02:48 PM


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