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Oct 10 2004, 09:05 AM
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Haywood Bay
If you like the way I treat you then come out to Haywood Bay, But if you like to be abused, then with him I guess you'll stay. They say that nice guys finish last, but that is just cliche, So if you want to try and make a change then come with me today. I'm not sure who put it in your head; this idea of being low, But whoever it was doesn't have a heart, and should realize that you glow. You radiate your beauty; it's such a magnificent show, But you never seem to take my word, you always "have to go". You ask me why I try so hard, and I answer subtle and true, I have no other motives, no permiscuous things to do. It's really all quite simple, I want to take care of you, But I know that will never happen, you'll never let me through. So I leave this offer on the table should you really want to say, "I feel like I am happy, I look forward to the day". Just call on me to pine for you, and fight your troubles away, You know where you can find me...down by Haywood Bay. [Footnote: I live in a place called Haywood Bay...and this is written for a certain person who never seems to give me a chance. Enjoy.] |
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Oct 10 2004, 09:53 PM
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I'll post more often so I can get added to your magnificent list, Joe.
I'll put up some of my abstracts later. Thank you for the pluses, everyone. And the title isnt' copyrighted...sell it to an emo band if you want |
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CrackedRearView Haywood Bay Oct 10 2004, 09:05 AM
MasteRxKiD Damn, very well done, Justin.
Seems like a poem w... Oct 10 2004, 01:01 PM
omg_melface Sounds like a wonderful emo song title.
I love it... Oct 10 2004, 01:41 PM
jambaJUICE wow.
hehe. it sounds like an advertisement. -- ... Oct 10 2004, 03:04 PM
ashesinthefall thats really good Oct 10 2004, 09:37 PM
MasteRxKiD Just make the request and I'll gladly add you.... Oct 11 2004, 12:11 AM
CrackedRearView Thanks for adding me, I'll post some more of m... Oct 12 2004, 09:27 PM
mSz_dOrk_anGeL <3 Its wonderful. Oct 15 2004, 09:53 PM
dreamerOi mang you write good poems& short storys. i dig... Oct 15 2004, 11:45 PM
Azarel Beautifully written; you take a subject which is e... Aug 9 2005, 02:48 PM![]() ![]() |