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 Oct 10 2004, 09:05 AM
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If you like the way I treat you then come out to Haywood Bay, But if you like to be abused, then with him I guess you'll stay. They say that nice guys finish last, but that is just cliche, So if you want to try and make a change then come with me today. I'm not sure who put it in your head; this idea of being low, But whoever it was doesn't have a heart, and should realize that you glow. You radiate your beauty; it's such a magnificent show, But you never seem to take my word, you always "have to go". You ask me why I try so hard, and I answer subtle and true, I have no other motives, no permiscuous things to do. It's really all quite simple, I want to take care of you, But I know that will never happen, you'll never let me through. So I leave this offer on the table should you really want to say, "I feel like I am happy, I look forward to the day". Just call on me to pine for you, and fight your troubles away, You know where you can find me...down by Haywood Bay. [Footnote: I live in a place called Haywood Bay...and this is written for a certain person who never seems to give me a chance. Enjoy.] |
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Oct 10 2004, 01:41 PM
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cb=bullshit.  Group: Member Posts: 1,783 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,793 |
Sounds like a wonderful emo song title.
I love it... You should write more often... And post them here... Because I'm tired of this other crap they make me read... I'M TIRED OF IT... [dies]... That girl's stupid for not giving you a chance... should I shoot her? 
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CrackedRearView Haywood Bay Oct 10 2004, 09:05 AM
MasteRxKiD Damn, very well done, Justin.
Seems like a poem w... Oct 10 2004, 01:01 PM jambaJUICE wow.
hehe. it sounds like an advertisement. -- ... Oct 10 2004, 03:04 PM ashesinthefall thats really good Oct 10 2004, 09:37 PM CrackedRearView I'll post more often so I can get added to you... Oct 10 2004, 09:53 PM MasteRxKiD Just make the request and I'll gladly add you.... Oct 11 2004, 12:11 AM CrackedRearView Thanks for adding me, I'll post some more of m... Oct 12 2004, 09:27 PM mSz_dOrk_anGeL <3 Its wonderful. Oct 15 2004, 09:53 PM dreamerOi mang you write good poems& short storys. i dig... Oct 15 2004, 11:45 PM
Azarel Beautifully written; you take a subject which is e... Aug 9 2005, 02:48 PM |
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