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 Oct 8 2004, 06:37 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer*  Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134  |
no one else can compare this world to you
you were my only friend, my only love but its all gone now since you moved away my heart feeling broken and torn apart i wont give up and fall on my knees im going to try my hardest and fulfill my dream to make you happy and put that smile on your face the look that started it all before you left without a trace its been so long now ive forgotten about you every moment that we had ive thrown away i gave up that day when you found someone new when he said those words i promised to say to you...... hmm i havent wrote a love poem in awhile hope yall likes |
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Oct 9 2004, 05:05 PM
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aww tis good, i like a lot
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dispn0ygonekrazy no one else Oct 8 2004, 06:37 PM
omg_melface It's nice!... but somehow it doesn't F... Oct 9 2004, 06:56 PM lucky_clover aww!! that is a sweet and cute poem. Oct 9 2004, 07:15 PM MasteRxKiD Yeah, I agree with what Mel says...
But, I really... Oct 9 2004, 11:57 PM
dispn0ygonekrazy heheh thnx everyone yeah i know about the middle a... Oct 11 2004, 05:54 PM |
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