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 Oct 7 2004, 09:24 PM
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An ordinary girl...smart, pretty, friendly...happy? I've been called everything BUT ordinary. I'm not the smartest, prettiest, girl you've ever seen. I'm a loner...I don't fit in with everyone else. I always stand out in a crowd. But all my life...I've been wanting to shout...I'm okay with being me...
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Oct 8 2004, 10:30 AM
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 Don't wake ghostie. Group: Official Member Posts: 3,546 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 2,405 |
I think it would be better as a haiku. It isn't very artistic that way, in fact it's just a statement. Be a little more creative.
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Hidemypain Ordinary Oct 7 2004, 09:24 PM
rainnydaiis hmm simple and good... keep it up =P
THOUGHT IT W... Oct 7 2004, 09:32 PM MasteRxKiD I'm confused with the first two sentences.
Ver... Oct 8 2004, 02:13 AM lucky_clover kinda confusing..... but i sorta get it. Oct 8 2004, 10:13 AM ethixfantazia It's okay, i kinda feel the same way a lot. pe... Oct 8 2004, 02:43 PM
PinkTrash Its better off a poem, start if off with the forma... Oct 11 2004, 11:34 PM |
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