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 Oct 7 2004, 09:24 PM
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An ordinary girl...smart, pretty, friendly...happy? I've been called everything BUT ordinary. I'm not the smartest, prettiest, girl you've ever seen. I'm a loner...I don't fit in with everyone else. I always stand out in a crowd. But all my life...I've been wanting to shout...I'm okay with being me...
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Oct 8 2004, 02:13 AM
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 Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
I'm confused with the first two sentences.
Very awkward sounding. Very short and straight to the point...I think you can go off in so many directions from there if you'd like to. |
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Hidemypain Ordinary Oct 7 2004, 09:24 PM
rainnydaiis hmm simple and good... keep it up =P
THOUGHT IT W... Oct 7 2004, 09:32 PM lucky_clover kinda confusing..... but i sorta get it. Oct 8 2004, 10:13 AM Retrogressive I think it would be better as a haiku. It isn... Oct 8 2004, 10:30 AM ethixfantazia It's okay, i kinda feel the same way a lot. pe... Oct 8 2004, 02:43 PM
PinkTrash Its better off a poem, start if off with the forma... Oct 11 2004, 11:34 PM |
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