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 Oct 7 2004, 09:26 PM
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 creepy heather  Group: Official Member Posts: 4,208 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,580  |
I'm experimenting a tad with my writing
 Our physical perception- Latitudes between Distaste Comfort- A remedy of life, Still, Firm- Too obese, or Whole- And overdone Its all too simple, Too— To me, at least Rushing In-between Latitudes with me My own personal Tummy Of blocks and puzzles To kiss with My calloused fingers- Pressuring From the finger’s tips Pressuring Latitudes Between my lips |
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Oct 7 2004, 10:49 PM
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 Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
Love the rhythm...
It's like a Haiku on crack...err, I mean that in a good way. Ooh, Frost used to be one of my favorite poets. "As the Frost would say...Nothing gold can stay" |
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Heathasm Latitudes Oct 7 2004, 09:26 PM
rainnydaiis hmm very interesting seems like a piece i read fro... Oct 7 2004, 09:31 PM Heathasm QUOTE(rainnydaiis @ Oct 7 2004, 9:31 PM)hmm v... Oct 7 2004, 09:48 PM rainnydaiis cant recall =P if i get it ill make sure ill post ... Oct 7 2004, 10:18 PM Heathasm well =p thank =p you =p very =p much =p Oct 7 2004, 10:43 PM rainnydaiis keke i love my face =P really you like it too eh =... Oct 7 2004, 10:45 PM rainnydaiis Omg i love that poem =P i found out about it becau... Oct 7 2004, 10:51 PM Heathasm hahahhahahhahah a haiku on crack hahah thats so me... Oct 7 2004, 10:59 PM rainnydaiis omg the road not taken is good and snowy evening i... Oct 7 2004, 11:01 PM Heathasm ah hah i forgot about the road not taken...that po... Oct 7 2004, 11:03 PM
MasteRxKiD My favorite poet is Steve Abee.
LoL, he was my ki... Oct 8 2004, 02:11 AM |
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