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post Oct 6 2004, 06:44 PM
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your eyes staring back at me, watching every move i make
deep in side my heart i see, my future blown away
i cant live my life this way, after every hit i take
i could only hope to be, myself and no one else

ive tried so hard to be the one
you could run to when your down
but now i see it all, go away
as i hope for a better day
now it all just dies alone, in this broken path i roam

and now i see what ive become
this monster you dont like
taken away our memories we once held
when i lost control of myself
now i stay alone in this dark place, where i can die here on my own
to never see the light again, im trapt in my own prison

something i wanted to write but never posted
 
 
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dispn0ygonekrazy
post Oct 7 2004, 09:10 AM
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thnx joe had alot of help from the people here if i never have found this area i wouldve been sticking to love poems and rhymes lol so this area in the forumn put a change on me made me see things i didnt think of writing
 

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