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 Oct 5 2004, 10:37 PM
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 Will write poetry for sex!  Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600  |
A quick write. Little effort...Meh.
Winter Fingertips of morning Softly brush my cheek. Wisps of December air slowly escape my lips Leaking secrets untold To ears deafened by false prospect Eyes forced shut From frigid truth. Denial - My frozen heart, My beating cause. The careful burden Seeping inside To freeze my already cold soul |
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Oct 5 2004, 11:55 PM
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Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
LoL, Would you quit with that, Sam?
QUOTE Just had to point out a few things. And I greatly appreciate that. I'd rather be harshly judged than mindlessly praised...Whatever improves my writing or opens up for good discussion is awesome. |
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MasteRxKiD Winter Oct 5 2004, 10:37 PM
NatiMarie Let's see...
QUOTEFingertips of morning
Softl... Oct 5 2004, 10:50 PM rainnydaiis very good writing =P Oct 5 2004, 11:19 PM MasteRxKiD QUOTELeaking secrets untold...a bid redundant...se... Oct 5 2004, 11:30 PM NatiMarie QUOTE(MasteRxKiD @ Oct 5 2004, 9:30 PM)My poi... Oct 5 2004, 11:38 PM rainnydaiis master got some advice =P
master not master anymor... Oct 5 2004, 11:40 PM rainnydaiis u will write poetry for sex? no wonder u made 2 ne... Oct 5 2004, 11:57 PM omg_melface Oh I finally get to hear the full poem...
I love... Oct 6 2004, 12:32 AM MasteRxKiD I love reading my poems aloud to you too, love. Oct 6 2004, 02:30 AM Heathasm this reminded me of a movie i saw where this lady ... Oct 6 2004, 10:00 AM MasteRxKiD Actually, I was only thinking of one, but pluraliz... Oct 6 2004, 06:12 PM dispn0ygonekrazy good write joe i like it ay i need some help joe i... Oct 6 2004, 06:25 PM MasteRxKiD Oh, I love essays!
Haha, what kind of essays?... Oct 6 2004, 06:37 PM PinkTrash Ah. beautiful
When I first read the title o.O I th... Oct 11 2004, 11:28 PM
MasteRxKiD Winter, the person? I have no idea who that is.
Bu... Oct 12 2004, 01:55 PM |
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