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post Oct 5 2004, 10:37 PM
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Will write poetry for sex!
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A quick write. Little effort...Meh.

Winter

Fingertips of morning
Softly brush my cheek.
Wisps of December air slowly escape my lips
Leaking secrets untold
To ears deafened by false prospect
Eyes forced shut
From frigid truth.
Denial -
My frozen heart,
My beating cause.
The careful burden
Seeping inside
To freeze my already cold soul
 
 
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NatiMarie
post Oct 5 2004, 11:38 PM
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I can rot your brain ;]
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QUOTE(MasteRxKiD @ Oct 5 2004, 9:30 PM)
My point being made was secrets are always told, one way or the other. At least, in my world.



I wrote it masking an image I had in my head. I would tell you what it is, but it just simplifies the poem by a lot and craps it down, LoL. Trust me though, it links with the poem. I didn't write the poem in hopes of keeping it stuck to the the theme. I just used the morning to inspire me and start me off. It is a quick write, with no proof reading or editing, whatsoever.

Thanks so much for your time to comment, and thanks for the praise. happy.gif
I'm glad someone is decent enough to give up a bit of their time for this forum.

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Yeppers.
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Yeah I know what you mean. Just had to point out a few things. And being that it was a quick write...that was very good indeed.

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