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Oct 5 2004, 10:37 PM
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![]() Will write poetry for sex! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
A quick write. Little effort...Meh.
Winter Fingertips of morning Softly brush my cheek. Wisps of December air slowly escape my lips Leaking secrets untold To ears deafened by false prospect Eyes forced shut From frigid truth. Denial - My frozen heart, My beating cause. The careful burden Seeping inside To freeze my already cold soul |
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Oct 5 2004, 11:38 PM
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![]() I can rot your brain ;] ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 1,160 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 42,261 |
QUOTE(MasteRxKiD @ Oct 5 2004, 9:30 PM) My point being made was secrets are always told, one way or the other. At least, in my world. I wrote it masking an image I had in my head. I would tell you what it is, but it just simplifies the poem by a lot and craps it down, LoL. Trust me though, it links with the poem. I didn't write the poem in hopes of keeping it stuck to the the theme. I just used the morning to inspire me and start me off. It is a quick write, with no proof reading or editing, whatsoever. Thanks so much for your time to comment, and thanks for the praise. I'm glad someone is decent enough to give up a bit of their time for this forum. -Joe Yeppers. =] Yeah I know what you mean. Just had to point out a few things. And being that it was a quick write...that was very good indeed. |
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MasteRxKiD Winter Oct 5 2004, 10:37 PM
NatiMarie Let's see...
QUOTEFingertips of morning
Softl... Oct 5 2004, 10:50 PM
rainnydaiis very good writing =P Oct 5 2004, 11:19 PM
MasteRxKiD QUOTELeaking secrets untold...a bid redundant...se... Oct 5 2004, 11:30 PM
rainnydaiis master got some advice =P
master not master anymor... Oct 5 2004, 11:40 PM
MasteRxKiD LoL, Would you quit with that, Sam?
QUOTEJust had... Oct 5 2004, 11:55 PM
rainnydaiis u will write poetry for sex? no wonder u made 2 ne... Oct 5 2004, 11:57 PM
omg_melface Oh I finally get to hear the full poem...
I love... Oct 6 2004, 12:32 AM
MasteRxKiD I love reading my poems aloud to you too, love. Oct 6 2004, 02:30 AM
Heathasm this reminded me of a movie i saw where this lady ... Oct 6 2004, 10:00 AM
MasteRxKiD Actually, I was only thinking of one, but pluraliz... Oct 6 2004, 06:12 PM
dispn0ygonekrazy good write joe i like it ay i need some help joe i... Oct 6 2004, 06:25 PM
MasteRxKiD Oh, I love essays!
Haha, what kind of essays?... Oct 6 2004, 06:37 PM
PinkTrash Ah. beautiful
When I first read the title o.O I th... Oct 11 2004, 11:28 PM
MasteRxKiD Winter, the person? I have no idea who that is.
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