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 Oct 4 2004, 07:36 PM
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 Can't have the hand without the cock.  Group: Member Posts: 2,481 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 50,622  |
a light shone brightly across midnight`s death
bury me deep, i cried. looking above, a muffled cry of anguish runs chills down my spine. pricks my neck as a shadow casts over me circling my hope and laughter, gazing fire down upon me i run feeling it`s eyes whisper hate into my blood.. poisoning my veins, extracting my joy. with one quick sweep i fall helplessly. blinded in moments. but with you. with the hold of you. im indestructable --- Blegh. that sucked arse.  oh wells, first post thingy majiggy for me. |
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Oct 4 2004, 10:00 PM
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Eternal Syn Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 |
That's really good. Don't be so hard on yourself.
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jambaJUICE crap poem Oct 4 2004, 07:36 PM
dispn0ygonekrazy kinda lost me jambajuice but yeh that was good kee... Oct 4 2004, 07:54 PM MasteRxKiD Hey, welcome to the Writing forums.
I liked what ... Oct 4 2004, 08:28 PM jambaJUICE lol. wow, i have feedback. amazing.
and im always... Oct 4 2004, 08:43 PM rainnydaiis lovely poem =P Welcome to cb forums and hope you a... Oct 4 2004, 08:54 PM
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