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 Oct 2 2004, 10:39 PM
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cb=bullshit.  Group: Member Posts: 1,783 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,793  |
Something very old that I have written.... very old...
One of my few poems... Yeah, no wonder I don't write them anymore.... A picture and a dream escapes her deep curious mind, as she writes upon the wall. She writes and screams, in her favorite color blue that makes sense to her but no sense to the world, So break up and break out and break in to understand when she makes her arms reach out, and open to anyone who cares but her cries are too soft, and can't be heard so it's made in the darkness, and loaded at night and builds up in sleep and so she sleeps, and slips away to the end of the world and end of the cries, living in dreams, and writing in blue. I figured I might as well post it since no one else is posting sh*t in writing... this forum has been neglected... |
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Oct 3 2004, 03:08 AM
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 Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
Don't say that, You know damn well I contribute to this forum as much as I can. But it's true...This has to be the most overlooked forum.
I LOOOVVVEEEE the opening line, sweetie. QUOTE A picture and a dream escapes her deep curious mind, as she writes upon the wall. She writes and screams, in her favorite color blue Awesome. Well done, even though it's old. |
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omg_melface Blue Oct 2 2004, 10:39 PM
lucky_clover pretty good indeed. i liked it.. Oct 5 2004, 05:49 PM Heathasm QUOTE(omg_melface @ Oct 2 2004, 10:39 PM)A pi... Oct 6 2004, 10:31 AM PinkTrash Sounds like an old poem I wrote o.O
The title also... Oct 11 2004, 11:36 PM
Azarel You're a wonderful writer; it's a shame yo... Aug 9 2005, 03:30 PM |
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