True Love, not exactly but do you catch my drift?;) |
 Sep 30 2004, 07:17 PM
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Eternal Syn  Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000  |
You're my True Love
It's as if you came from above You're the only one with the keys to my heart I can't stand it when we're apart You're the one that lights up my day Whenever I see you smile my way You're the one love of my life, you're my boo And soon my Love for you grew And as you see My joy and glee Revolves around you Is this true for you too? This poem took me 2 hours to rhyme... 
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Sep 30 2004, 09:54 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
rhyming life lol i get that too im stuck with strife wife and knife and if u read my other poems posted here i used it like this
You're the one love of my life without you itd hurt like i was cut by a knife u see lol spend more time here and learn |
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Cloud_X True Love Sep 30 2004, 07:17 PM
dispn0ygonekrazy wow 2 hours umm nice job though but 2 hours WHOAH ... Sep 30 2004, 07:30 PM MasteRxKiD 2 hours?! Sheezus.
Haha, 'Boo'...I ca... Sep 30 2004, 07:37 PM rainnydaiis i say good job but 2 hours.. goodness Sep 30 2004, 07:41 PM Cloud_X Well it took me a while to think of a word that rh... Sep 30 2004, 09:49 PM MasteRxKiD Then don't rhyme at all.
Why struggle so hard... Sep 30 2004, 09:53 PM Cloud_X lol but I wanted something to sound good. Somethin... Sep 30 2004, 10:54 PM MasteRxKiD If you can't find a rhyme for a word, Then jus... Sep 30 2004, 11:17 PM Cloud_X You've got a point..I guess I was stressin on ... Sep 30 2004, 11:29 PM MasteRxKiD Hey, no prob, we do it all the time, right?
Well,... Sep 30 2004, 11:31 PM Cloud_X Yeah..Thanks for the help tho man. I really appric... Sep 30 2004, 11:33 PM ichiban Nice poem. Jez remember not everything has to rhym... Sep 30 2004, 11:41 PM rainnydaiis i try not to use rhymes anymore.. seems more like ... Sep 30 2004, 11:43 PM Cloud_X hehehe. Thanks for the input. I have written on... Sep 30 2004, 11:43 PM dispn0ygonekrazy yeah i try not to rhyme too but still a habit in m... Oct 1 2004, 08:32 AM
MasteRxKiD QUOTE(Cloud_X @ Sep 30 2004, 8:43 PM)hehehe. ... Oct 1 2004, 02:39 PM |
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