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 Sep 28 2004, 10:08 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer*  Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134  |
i wrote this for my ex right now i dont give a care about any writing guidelines critisism say whatever u want i rhymed this one iight
no matter how hard i tried to get u back i gotta give it up and get back on track the times with you id never forget every last moment that id never regret only that time when everything fell where it went in chaos and sent us through hell just a phone call away i heard ur voice i choked up on my words and i didnt have a choice i was so scared i couldnt say sorry to you out of so many chances it didnt go through the songs u played while we were on the phone i cried so hard and realized that im on my own now im gonna go away and out of your sight so it can go back to the way when everything was right im sorry i couldnt say these simple words to you but only to hope that youd keep your head up and make it through im like going goodbye here yall im like so f*cked up right now |
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Sep 30 2004, 02:14 AM
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 Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
You're just blinded right now, Mike.
All your emotions are just clouding you judgment. Give yourself time, and think things through when you're more calm and level-headed. |
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dispn0ygonekrazy im depressed Sep 28 2004, 10:08 PM
rainnydaiis nice poem... wat happened... Sep 28 2004, 10:10 PM dispn0ygonekrazy i just gave up on everything man...im thinking of ... Sep 28 2004, 10:13 PM rainnydaiis u quit i will hunt you!! Sep 28 2004, 10:14 PM dispn0ygonekrazy right now man i dont noe what to do..ive thought o... Sep 28 2004, 10:15 PM rainnydaiis if you quit imma quit Sep 28 2004, 10:48 PM dispn0ygonekrazy well man u dont needa quit if i quit i already cam... Sep 29 2004, 08:39 AM rainnydaiis u bastard... =P Sep 29 2004, 08:40 AM dispn0ygonekrazy bastard lol well sam dooooode well shiet man u lik... Sep 29 2004, 09:00 AM rainnydaiis your seriously leaving...
man alright then.. cya a... Sep 29 2004, 09:03 AM dispn0ygonekrazy later Sep 29 2004, 09:09 AM rainnydaiis aiitez you better stay we need more writers in CB.... Sep 29 2004, 09:11 AM dispn0ygonekrazy theres plenty of good writers here yall dont need ... Sep 29 2004, 09:14 AM omg_melface You're so emo...
why are you going to kill yo... Sep 29 2004, 12:07 PM rainnydaiis ahhh u made mel mad... just stay mike girls are so... Sep 29 2004, 06:29 PM Devastation eh, cheer up fellow poetry writer. Girls arent eve... Sep 29 2004, 07:10 PM dispn0ygonekrazy i guess your right mel im some stupid emo guy with... Sep 29 2004, 07:34 PM omg_melface I wasn't that serious about the no clue depres... Sep 29 2004, 07:44 PM dispn0ygonekrazy im sorry im just being an ass right now i dont mea... Sep 29 2004, 07:46 PM omg_melface okay, have fun...
and i still think you're an... Sep 29 2004, 07:48 PM dispn0ygonekrazy hehe i know well yall take care iight ill miss yal... Sep 29 2004, 07:50 PM LoserLuvS QUOTE(dispn0ygonekrazy @ Sep 28 2004, 10:08 P... Sep 29 2004, 09:48 PM rainnydaiis you didn't even say bye to me you are an ass... Sep 30 2004, 12:11 AM faithin_felix aww so sweet, really nice poem so talented. for a ... Sep 30 2004, 12:50 AM dispn0ygonekrazy well mel said dont give any umm goodbyes but yeh a... Sep 30 2004, 09:33 AM omg_melface he didn't even say how long he's going to ... Sep 30 2004, 02:08 PM j x tEARz I'll tell you this. The most biggest mistake t... Sep 30 2004, 02:15 PM dispn0ygonekrazy QUOTEhe didn't even say how long he's goin... Sep 30 2004, 07:10 PM ichiban It's a good poem. But calm down a bit ... it... Sep 30 2004, 11:47 PM
Cloud_X She has a point...don't go stressin' over ... Sep 30 2004, 11:55 PM |
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