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[LoST SouL]

hey hey i rote a poem wanna kno wat u guys think... have ne poems urself submit them here... i kno its kinda depressin n a lil scary but watcha think

The Child
A tear is a cry from the soul
It is a calling from the child within
The child that's scared and terrified
of Death's Angel
The Dark Angel that hovers over the child
And sucks the happiness from our lives
Happiness is unseen
It is a no exsistant joy
The child within does not know happiness
It knows fear, trama
dispair, depression
and pain.
The child does not simle
A simle is something the soul does not know
Our souls cry out for help
Our hearts are blackened by murder
The child is enclosed
In a sea of darkness
It sees shadows
Emmitting from the dark enclosed hallway
The shadows from the past, present, and future
It scares the child
The child crys out for help
In pain
It is killing our soul
It eats us alive
We suffer
The child cannot run
cannot move
The child is immobile
Repressed by the thoughts within
Love and hatred is corrupting us
Corupting the child within
We cry
The Fallen Angels encircle the child
They reach out
Suicide
Blood is flowing from the childs viens
We die
We beg for help
Tears flow from our eyes
We speak
but hear nothing
We have sight
but see nothing
We are all alone
in a vast vast place of darkness
We grow weak
We want to die
But the child never dies
So we suffer

I wrote a poem about my stupid Chinese teacher...its more like rap now cuz it rhymes

Smith is a white name.
you thought you got a fame.
of wut?
a piece of slut?
you GOT no fame,
all you brought us was shame.
You drugged up looper,
You so ugly you cant even be a hooker.
Smith you bore my class,
Your face broke the glass.
You stupid ass.
All I hear you saying,
is always been the same thing.
"You know what?"
"You know what?"
GO LICK MUD!
Old b*tch,
you cant even teach.
I bet even I can teach better,
Cuz you cant even spell out a letter.
Whats that you've been to college?
Oh please, you don't even have enough knowledge.
We all hate you so much we want you to die,
we wanna kill you with all of our might.
What a great sight.
Seeing your dead body,
we'll go off and party.