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 Sep 24 2004, 08:36 PM
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we both stare at the moonlit sky
thinking of you i start to cry i walk alone in this pouring rain feeling so hurt, feeling so much pain i thought of that time when i held u so tight whispering these words evrything will be alright the look on our face made everything okay just one smile u took my heart away day by day im still living in a past a past i once had that never did last everyday im lost with nothing to do but a broke down heart thats always loving you yay hope u like |
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Sep 25 2004, 04:20 PM
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lol yeh that one was a quickie but i still like it
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dispn0ygonekrazy a depressing poem Sep 24 2004, 08:36 PM
swe3ttemptasian awWww.. cute poem =]..but depressin..hmm Sep 24 2004, 09:29 PM dispn0ygonekrazy lol i dunno about depressin but when i wrote it to... Sep 24 2004, 09:36 PM swe3ttemptasian lol it sounds depressin to me.. most of my poems a... Sep 24 2004, 09:37 PM dispn0ygonekrazy lol something in common same here i write poems ab... Sep 24 2004, 09:46 PM rainnydaiis you know what we should making a writing family =P... Sep 25 2004, 11:48 AM dispn0ygonekrazy a writing family lol good idea SAM!! props... Sep 25 2004, 01:11 PM MyVermilionPlague That's a nice poem.
Really nice, actually.
Mad... Sep 25 2004, 03:53 PM omg_melface Some of it doesn't make sense...
you both sta... Sep 25 2004, 04:14 PM rainnydaiis tahts why its called free write poems =P Sep 25 2004, 04:22 PM dispn0ygonekrazy yh u feel me sam geez lol Sep 25 2004, 04:25 PM lucky_clover that is such a sweet peom!!! so sad...... Oct 5 2004, 05:28 PM fallingstar *singsong*
mike is depreeeeesed! Dec 26 2006, 07:14 PM
wildncrazyath3rt i like it you can feel all of the emotions that u ... Mar 16 2007, 07:02 AM |
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