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my love poem
dispn0ygonekrazy
post Sep 24 2004, 03:26 PM
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we both sit next to each other in the still of the night
saying these words everything will be alright
the moon shined down on us there was a sparkle in your eye
it was tears falling down your face you started to cry
i held u tight to be next to you
telling the whole world how much i love you
u smiled back at me with that look on ur face
i told u baybee no one can ever take yur place
its hard for me to explain cuz i love u so much
but its that kinda love no one can touch
i promise someday it will be me and you
till then im always loving you

i like writing but i dunno why i cant write an essay or get good grades in english geez lol
 
 
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post Sep 24 2004, 04:23 PM
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poem fantic srry

i thought it was right to be with you
i guess everything messed up when i said i love you
now we dont talk and met our seperate ways
the feeling is dead,its gone, it died away
i thought i gave up cuz i lost you
its just we had our own problems and didnt make it through
i wont say it was wasted love that we had
its just the decisions i made u didnt like and it all went bad
u started to hate me for just one thing
when i broke your heart u hated everything
i never intended to make u feel that way
i tried hard and hard to make evrything stay
now my trying didnt go so well
it ended up in chaos and sent me through hell
but all that stuff is all in the past
ill remember everything even what happened last
when u moved on i couldnt handle the pain
this is how i put it the way i would explain
 

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dispn0ygonekrazy   my love poem   Sep 24 2004, 03:26 PM
MasteRxKiD   Ah, yet another love poem.... For one, Welcome to...   Sep 24 2004, 03:47 PM
dispn0ygonekrazy   hehe thnx for advice man ima use it   Sep 24 2004, 03:54 PM
rainnydaiis   master is ruler of writing +P haha nice one loved...   Sep 24 2004, 03:57 PM
dispn0ygonekrazy   thnx yeh he got a point i dont very much use the g...   Sep 24 2004, 04:07 PM
rainnydaiis   same i hate writing to a like guideline.. like 8 s...   Sep 24 2004, 04:09 PM
dispn0ygonekrazy   lol yeah i agree with you on that i hate rules to ...   Sep 24 2004, 04:10 PM
rainnydaiis   omg thank god sometimes when we free write for poe...   Sep 24 2004, 04:11 PM
dispn0ygonekrazy   LMAO yes well heres another poem hmm a poem out...   Sep 24 2004, 04:12 PM
rainnydaiis   oo was that a quickie?   Sep 24 2004, 04:13 PM
dispn0ygonekrazy   yep a quickie   Sep 24 2004, 04:15 PM
dispn0ygonekrazy   another poem enjoy why do i pretend its all okay ...   Sep 24 2004, 04:21 PM
dispn0ygonekrazy   poem fantic srry i thought it was right to be wit...   Sep 24 2004, 04:23 PM
rainnydaiis   lolz nice poems but just make new topics for each...   Sep 24 2004, 04:24 PM
MasteRxKiD   Haha, Thanks for the comment about me being the ...   Sep 24 2004, 05:06 PM
wind&fire   "i told u baybee no one can ever take yur pla...   Sep 27 2004, 03:25 AM
pinksparkliefire   this is my love poem....... I think about your fa...   Sep 27 2004, 04:26 PM
pinksparkliefire   heres another one...... I asked him if he likes m...   Sep 27 2004, 04:30 PM
Heathasm   QUOTE(pinksparkliefire @ Sep 27 2004, 4:30 PM...   Sep 27 2004, 06:03 PM
dispn0ygonekrazy   true i heard the same b4 too   Sep 27 2004, 06:18 PM
MasteRxKiD   Makes me question whether or not the first one you...   Sep 27 2004, 11:05 PM
j x tEARz   Nice poem~   Sep 30 2004, 02:19 PM


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