my love poem |
 Sep 24 2004, 03:26 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer*  Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134  |
we both sit next to each other in the still of the night
saying these words everything will be alright the moon shined down on us there was a sparkle in your eye it was tears falling down your face you started to cry i held u tight to be next to you telling the whole world how much i love you u smiled back at me with that look on ur face i told u baybee no one can ever take yur place its hard for me to explain cuz i love u so much but its that kinda love no one can touch i promise someday it will be me and you till then im always loving you i like writing but i dunno why i cant write an essay or get good grades in english geez lol |
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Sep 24 2004, 04:12 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
LMAO yes well heres another poem
hmm a poem outta the blue i opened my eyes and started to see i realized what a person i came out to be im sorry if things didnt go our way no matter what i did u still drifted away i thought i could finally see the right road to take but everything fell down and it started to break now i fall down and beg on my knees just another chance before you leave how much i need you to hold and to love just to let everyone know your my angel, the gift from above |
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dispn0ygonekrazy my love poem Sep 24 2004, 03:26 PM
MasteRxKiD Ah, yet another love poem....
For one, Welcome to... Sep 24 2004, 03:47 PM dispn0ygonekrazy hehe thnx for advice man ima use it Sep 24 2004, 03:54 PM rainnydaiis master is ruler of writing +P
haha nice one loved... Sep 24 2004, 03:57 PM dispn0ygonekrazy thnx yeh he got a point i dont very much use the g... Sep 24 2004, 04:07 PM rainnydaiis same i hate writing to a like guideline.. like 8 s... Sep 24 2004, 04:09 PM dispn0ygonekrazy lol yeah i agree with you on that i hate rules to ... Sep 24 2004, 04:10 PM rainnydaiis omg thank god sometimes when we free write for poe... Sep 24 2004, 04:11 PM rainnydaiis oo was that a quickie? Sep 24 2004, 04:13 PM dispn0ygonekrazy yep a quickie Sep 24 2004, 04:15 PM dispn0ygonekrazy another poem enjoy
why do i pretend its all okay
... Sep 24 2004, 04:21 PM dispn0ygonekrazy poem fantic srry
i thought it was right to be wit... Sep 24 2004, 04:23 PM rainnydaiis lolz nice poems but just make new topics for each... Sep 24 2004, 04:24 PM MasteRxKiD Haha, Thanks for the comment about me being the ... Sep 24 2004, 05:06 PM wind&fire "i told u baybee no one can ever take yur pla... Sep 27 2004, 03:25 AM pinksparkliefire this is my love poem.......
I think about your fa... Sep 27 2004, 04:26 PM pinksparkliefire heres another one......
I asked him if he likes m... Sep 27 2004, 04:30 PM Heathasm QUOTE(pinksparkliefire @ Sep 27 2004, 4:30 PM... Sep 27 2004, 06:03 PM dispn0ygonekrazy true i heard the same b4 too Sep 27 2004, 06:18 PM MasteRxKiD Makes me question whether or not the first one you... Sep 27 2004, 11:05 PM
j x tEARz Nice poem~ Sep 30 2004, 02:19 PM |
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