my love poem Options

[dispn0ygonekrazy]

we both sit next to each other in the still of the night
saying these words everything will be alright
the moon shined down on us there was a sparkle in your eye
it was tears falling down your face you started to cry
i held u tight to be next to you
telling the whole world how much i love you
u smiled back at me with that look on ur face
i told u baybee no one can ever take yur place
its hard for me to explain cuz i love u so much
but its that kinda love no one can touch
i promise someday it will be me and you
till then im always loving you

i like writing but i dunno why i cant write an essay or get good grades in english geez lol

[TheSilenceInDict...]

Ah, yet another love poem....

For one, Welcome to the forums.

Two, the reason why you don't do well with essays and whatnot may be because it's controlled - there are guidelines to follow. With your own writing, there aren't any boundaries, and it's your own emotions being translated into pen on paper. You're more comfortable with it, and the writing flows through much easier.