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 Sep 24 2004, 02:54 AM
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 Will write poetry for sex!  Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600  |
This piece was a quick write. Hope you guys enjoy - Comments greatly appreciated.
 --- A lost dollar taught me the woes of life. The month that has passed me by shows me the blur of forgotten dreams locked away in dark malevolence. And here I sit, a beckoning whisper in my ear, forever muffled by nightmares untold. To sleep is to escape the nightmare, wake from mental chains that bound me to desolated fantasies, warped by the victim itself. And I stand, still lost, with no wall for me to stop myself from stumbling. |
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Sep 24 2004, 02:46 PM
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Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
Thanks.
 Although being a quick write, I put more effort and thought into each seperate line, focusing on just one line at a time and not the whole piece as an entirety. Try looking at them as poetic one-liners and think them through. I hope they're good enough for people to get something out of each one. |
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MasteRxKiD Still Lost. Sep 24 2004, 02:54 AM
rainnydaiis wow.... very short and yet it still gets to me =P
... Sep 24 2004, 09:02 AM omg_melface Everything you write is absolutely amazing...
I l... Sep 24 2004, 02:15 PM lucky_clover quickwrites are awsome.... so good job. Oct 5 2004, 05:35 PM MasteRxKiD Thanks. I thought of the first line and decided to... Oct 5 2004, 10:16 PM imadorkabledxd WOW. that honestly wowed me. ok im gona go read yo... Mar 18 2005, 12:13 PM
Teesa that wowed me as well..that was a quick write for ... Mar 18 2005, 06:37 PM |
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