a photograph i should have taken, my view on love |
 Sep 24 2004, 04:31 AM
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 creepy heather  Group: Official Member Posts: 4,208 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,580  |
The napkin was steamed to where it looked like a moist cloud, towering over the modern soup cup; it was so mellow-dramatic, and pretty--I regret just throwing it away--I could have sat in another room watching it harden-returning to a more calloused version of what it used to be, just as young girl’s hearts do, after they have fallen in and out of love (When romantic things like lying naked in the bathtub together just don’t seem to fill her heart any more); or taken a picture to keep in mind the effect-how full the napkin looked and felt-not having to see the warm soup’s perspiration slowly evaporate-trickling down it’s sides, as if it were bleeding all over the cup, and dramatically spilling onto the counter top
theres no certain style to this i just wrote exactly what was flowing through my mind |
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Sep 24 2004, 02:19 PM
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cb=bullshit. Group: Member Posts: 1,783 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,793 |
QUOTE(Heathasm @ Sep 24 2004, 3:31 AM) theres no certain style to this i just wrote exactly what was flowing through my mind i do that ALL the time... So I know exactly how that is... but it sucks when i get carried away and it makes no sense at all..Heh.. I like it! =] |
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Heathasm a photograph i should have taken Sep 24 2004, 04:31 AM
rainnydaiis wow nicely done... it seems like theres a certain ... Sep 24 2004, 09:03 AM Heathasm QUOTE(rainnydaiis @ Sep 24 2004, 9:03 AM)wow ... Sep 24 2004, 11:05 AM MasteRxKiD Finally! I haven't seen great work in a wh... Sep 24 2004, 02:41 PM Heathasm QUOTE(MasteRxKiD @ Sep 24 2004, 2:41 PM)Final... Sep 25 2004, 07:32 PM xSonia Deleted Sep 26 2004, 01:15 AM
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