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[LoST SouL]

hey hey i rote a poem wanna kno wat u guys think... have ne poems urself submit them here... i kno its kinda depressin n a lil scary but watcha think

The Child
A tear is a cry from the soul
It is a calling from the child within
The child that's scared and terrified
of Death's Angel
The Dark Angel that hovers over the child
And sucks the happiness from our lives
Happiness is unseen
It is a no exsistant joy
The child within does not know happiness
It knows fear, trama
dispair, depression
and pain.
The child does not simle
A simle is something the soul does not know
Our souls cry out for help
Our hearts are blackened by murder
The child is enclosed
In a sea of darkness
It sees shadows
Emmitting from the dark enclosed hallway
The shadows from the past, present, and future
It scares the child
The child crys out for help
In pain
It is killing our soul
It eats us alive
We suffer
The child cannot run
cannot move
The child is immobile
Repressed by the thoughts within
Love and hatred is corrupting us
Corupting the child within
We cry
The Fallen Angels encircle the child
They reach out
Suicide
Blood is flowing from the childs viens
We die
We beg for help
Tears flow from our eyes
We speak
but hear nothing
We have sight
but see nothing
We are all alone
in a vast vast place of darkness
We grow weak
We want to die
But the child never dies
So we suffer

[LoST SouL]

Ya See...

you love me
you love me not
if you dont
please make it stop
make the pain go away
make me happy another day
the pain is killing me inside
the pain is making me want to die

ya see...

i love you
i love you not
but i do
i dont want to stop
you make me happy everyday
no matter wat words you were to say
i live but wabt to die
the pain inside makes me cry
am i your joy?
am i your love?

cus ya see...

i love you
and theres nuthing above
id give my life
my joy
my pride
no matter the troubles
or the strife
cause you are
you are my life
no one could change my mind
no one like you can i find

ya see...

please stay another day
please dont leave me
dont go away
i need you
i need you here
i need you
i need you to stay

now ya see...
or you dont...

now answer my question
do you love me
do you love me not
cus i love you
nothing in this world can make it stop