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 Sep 22 2004, 09:06 PM
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The special someone
The one thats in your heart The one who you cry for The one you smile for Might not be perfect Might not be the prettiest Has some meaning to you Has a way to get to you Who you want to be with Who you long to see That special someone |
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Sep 22 2004, 09:14 PM
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 Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
I love the really straight to point, short poems that are well done.
This is probably one of them. If it were more metaphorical, it'd be awesome. Good shtuff. |
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rainnydaiis Special one Sep 22 2004, 09:06 PM
rainnydaiis lolz thx all i need is your opinion and that speci... Sep 22 2004, 09:17 PM MasteRxKiD Well, I'm glad I could be of some help.
I hop... Sep 22 2004, 09:22 PM
rainnydaiis hehe sometimes that longing can never be fufilled ... Sep 22 2004, 09:35 PM |
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