Melancholy Grin, please read and comment.. |
 Sep 15 2004, 06:03 AM
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 i like cake.  Group: Member Posts: 25 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,796  |
Melancholy Grin
As I linger in the hallway Stroking doorbells one by one, they come to find me. Yet they know I'm just a figure from disgrace, With a melancholy grin.. Silent voices speak this sin. None but darkness clings to faith. Yet where in time have you seen me begin? Let the tears bleed to my pillow, As those words will numb and Tear apart to overcome the fear... Can we escape what we're left to conceal, With a melancholy grin.. Silent voices speak this sin. None but darkness clings to faith. Yet where in time have you seen me begin? How I've wished to ever tell you... About the gloom and heartbreak piercing through my soul... ... or have you noticed, thought, or even kept in mind? you're the only one who's really died. As the smile on my face Shall recoil with no trace, It's my eyes that look up Will you realize the truth? With a melancholy grin.. Silent voices speak this sin. None but darkness clings to faith. Yet where in time have you seen me begin? With a melancholy grin.. |
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Sep 19 2004, 11:19 AM
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 the chick with rainbow hair Group: Member Posts: 19 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 34,484 |
Thats -really- beautiful.....and I think Im one of alot of people here who can relate..I love it
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flip_dorkette Melancholy Grin Sep 15 2004, 06:03 AM
captured_serenity i like that...that's nice...what inspired you ... Sep 15 2004, 07:40 AM flip_dorkette it`s kind of a song i began a few weeks ago an... Sep 16 2004, 02:57 AM smthngcrprategrl34 this is a great poem i can totally relate to this Sep 18 2004, 11:53 PM DesperateXMeasures You are a very talented writer.
I love it. Sep 19 2004, 12:10 AM
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