Lonely Heart, Another poem |
 Sep 16 2004, 03:07 PM
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SOS Brigade!!  Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775  |
Another Poem I wrote...
The life of a lonely heart whose love was torn apart Living life with only tears To love one now being a fear the memories of smiling knowing all of it was lying the laughter you thought that will never end the day came when she said lets be friends afraid to open to new people Ignoring them was thought of as simple Never loving another |
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Sep 17 2004, 01:25 PM
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 creepy heather Group: Official Member Posts: 4,208 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,580 |
it's a really simply rhyme, i didn't like too much. i sugest being more creative and unique with it
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rainnydaiis Lonely Heart Sep 16 2004, 03:07 PM
MasteRxKiD Hmm, Rather well done, Especially considering that... Sep 16 2004, 11:11 PM inquisitive_ Wow! Makes me feel lonely. Its a very good poe... Sep 16 2004, 11:13 PM
lucky_clover nice!!! i smiled when i read that poem... Oct 5 2004, 05:46 PM |
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