till next year... |
 Sep 8 2004, 07:51 PM
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 LunchboxXx  Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810  |
UNTIL NEXT YEAR
My eyes are resting on the sunset As we close in on summer’s end I’ll miss staying up until the morning I’ll miss sneaking out with all my friends As school approaches with its teachings As foliage browns until it’s dead The difference between school and summer Are lessons read and lessons lived As we sit on the porch and drift away Is this our labor or our judgment day? Autumn through spring I will be waiting here So, so long, summer. Until next year… Tour busses full of my self medication To heal my anger with a pit That fateful game of spin the bottle Let me deliver your first kiss With the three rivers congregation Independence and fire works You wanna go into the basement? A darkened room can have it’s perks. As we sit on the porch and drift away Is this our labor or is this our judgment day? Autumn through spring I will be waiting here So, so long, summer. Until next year… With every breath of heat these are the days for which I bleed I tread on asphalt streets, music and friends are all I need With every breath of heat these are the days for which I bleed I TREAD THE ASPHALT STREETS, MUSIC AND FRIENDS ARE ALL I NEED! As we sit on the porch and drift away Is this our labor or is this our judgment day? Autumn through spring I will be waiting here So, so long, summer. Until next year… |
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Sep 13 2004, 01:07 PM
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 eeny meeny miny mo Group: Member Posts: 60 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 42,008 |
You definitely are talented... I especially like this line:
The difference between school and summer Are lessons read and lessons lived You definitely capture the essence of Summer and what it means when you're growing up... |
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ryfitaDF till next year... Sep 8 2004, 07:51 PM
mizzinno i like it. i was just singing a song, and i think ... Sep 10 2004, 02:04 PM ryfitaDF thank you. thank you. yes, it is a song and, yes, ... Sep 10 2004, 02:33 PM mizzinno eh, i wasnt really comparing you. i liked it thoug... Sep 10 2004, 02:41 PM tainted_angel You've got some amazing talent. I can very wel... Sep 12 2004, 12:12 AM yanners oh wow. you wrote this as a song? its beautiful... Sep 12 2004, 05:13 AM
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