Like A Rose In Concrete, ....a poem |
 Sep 6 2004, 09:38 AM
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this is a poem called "like a rose in concrete" i wrote. i don't know if its finished but here is what i have. give me you input after you read it plz. some parts are a little cheesy but its what came to mind.
like a rose in concrete your beautiful to me when i see you now i want to fall to my knees i just can't help but to let you be like a rose in concrete your beautiful to me like a rose in concrete you stand tall and strong when i see you walking the walls around my heart fall then my heart runs with no one to call like a rose in concrete you stan strong and tall like a rose in concrete youre unique in a way you are the lighthouse that guides my way one little seagull one big bay like a rose in concrete your unique in a way |
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Sep 6 2004, 05:18 PM
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Awesome job... I really like it... I really think that the poem could be one of those "never ending" ones where you can always add on to it... great job
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song_gurl Like A Rose In Concrete Sep 6 2004, 09:38 AM
sporadic A rose in concrete... interesting.
Very nice poem. Sep 6 2004, 10:39 AM C.Lime.Jello. S-T-A-N-D
Sorry.... But you spelled it wrong.
Ove... Sep 6 2004, 05:11 PM
F1R3B4T i think each line needs to be followed more on the... Sep 6 2004, 11:23 PM |
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