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 Sep 5 2004, 05:00 PM
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Why do I feel numb?
Why is it so cold? What is this feeling I can't succumb? The light dimmed out long ago Now I sit here to rot; no one to hold Why are these scars burned so deep? Someone save me now or forever I'll sleep The numbness is quite unbearable The only thing that could save me now is a miracle Oh yes - God...where is he now? He doesn't hear my screams and shouts - am I not loud? Gasping for bittersweet oxygen, I uncontrollably choke Crimson liquid peruses my apparel; down it soaks In an instant, the intruder pierces me once more My soul slowly escapes my corpse as I fall to the floor Life is full of "if only"s, is it not? I'd be here if only it wasn't myself that I fought |
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Sep 6 2004, 04:08 AM
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oh i see she changed it lmao i had no idea wat rearview was talking about in his first post
wow great poem the emotional value is overwhelming  QUOTE Gasping for bittersweet oxygen, I uncontrollably choke yeh i relli liked that line for some reason  QUOTE My soul slowly escapes my corpse as I fall to the floor shudn't ur soul escape ur corpse AFTER u've fallen? lol sry |
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Kathleen Bittersweet Sep 5 2004, 05:00 PM
C.Lime.Jello. QUOTE(Kathleen @ Sep 5 2004, 3:00 PM)Why do I... Sep 5 2004, 05:08 PM NatiMarie Kathleen!
Yet again...whoohoo! Astounding ... Sep 5 2004, 07:45 PM CrackedRearView Good emotion.
"Surcome", that's a n... Sep 5 2004, 10:00 PM Kathleen Eep. I meant "succumb". *Hits head* Than... Sep 5 2004, 11:01 PM CrackedRearView Oh, I actually thought it was a real word. Sep 5 2004, 11:13 PM MyVermilionPlague Wheee!
That's a good poem, Kathleen.
I lik... Sep 7 2004, 07:58 AM Kathleen QUOTEshudn't ur soul escape ur corpse AFTER u... Sep 7 2004, 06:08 PM ComradeRed QUOTE(F1R3B4T @ Sep 6 2004, 4:08 AM)shudn... Sep 7 2004, 06:10 PM tainted_angel Oh my gawd, Kathleen. You've got some major ta... Sep 7 2004, 06:11 PM C.Lime.Jello. I won a contest at poetry[dot]com
Now they won... Sep 7 2004, 06:37 PM islandkiss QUOTE(C.Lime.Jello. @ Sep 7 2004, 6:37 PM)Thi... Sep 8 2004, 07:41 PM Kathleen Haha aww thanks, you guys. I've thought of en... Sep 9 2004, 07:13 PM
CrackedRearView QUOTE(Kathleen @ Sep 9 2004, 6:13 PM)...I... Sep 11 2004, 12:50 AM |
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