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 Mar 16 2004, 08:30 PM
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 Some 1 plz find me, help me find my way..my way bak 2 bliss  Group: Member Posts: 288 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 1,748  |
hey hey i rote a poem wanna kno wat u guys think... have ne poems urself submit them here... i kno its kinda depressin n a lil scary but watcha think
The Child A tear is a cry from the soul It is a calling from the child within The child that's scared and terrified of Death's Angel The Dark Angel that hovers over the child And sucks the happiness from our lives Happiness is unseen It is a no exsistant joy The child within does not know happiness It knows fear, trama dispair, depression and pain. The child does not simle A simle is something the soul does not know Our souls cry out for help Our hearts are blackened by murder The child is enclosed In a sea of darkness It sees shadows Emmitting from the dark enclosed hallway The shadows from the past, present, and future It scares the child The child crys out for help In pain It is killing our soul It eats us alive We suffer The child cannot run cannot move The child is immobile Repressed by the thoughts within Love and hatred is corrupting us Corupting the child within We cry The Fallen Angels encircle the child They reach out Suicide Blood is flowing from the childs viens We die We beg for help Tears flow from our eyes We speak but hear nothing We have sight but see nothing We are all alone in a vast vast place of darkness We grow weak We want to die But the child never dies So we suffer |
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Mar 17 2004, 03:08 PM
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okay guys... this is part of my therapy from when i've attempted sucicide so its deep... but i kinda like it...
Fear Im so tired that i cant even sleep theres so much pain that goes way too deep i want to be different and sand out from the crowd but you cant hear my screams you're all just too loud all the little tears that fall from my eyes and all the little cuts come from all the lies its been like this for so long im forgetting who i am i cant tell right from wrong and i wonder when it will end when will someone notice when will they see my tears when will they finally see the scars that result from all of these years 
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