It's too late |
 Sep 3 2004, 03:20 PM
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 !shobe!  Group: Member Posts: 664 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 5,912  |
Sitting there collecting dust
It longs for companionship Feeling like an outcast It has forgotten the word “friendship” Without a friend It slowly loses faith Ends up turning into a fiend Filled with so much hate No one bothers to help the creature Being the insensitive pricks they are They can’t get pass its outside features They only see the scars “Take the time to get to understand me And I promise; you won’t regret what you see.” No one listens though. |
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Sep 3 2004, 08:30 PM
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!shobe! Group: Member Posts: 664 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 5,912 |
yea... that and like.. people immediately look at your negative side only... you know how it is.. when a person does a lot of good deeds, all those will be ignored once you do something wrong.
the charcter in my poem was ostracized by society and now, its soul has turned bitter and the goodness in it has disappeared. that's why the title is "it's too late." everything that was ever good in it is gone now. |
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aud_chua It's too late Sep 3 2004, 03:20 PM
Angelos hmm thats kinda deep is i get what its about but j... Sep 3 2004, 03:22 PM
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