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 Aug 24 2004, 06:40 PM
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 DecadentVoid  Group: Member Posts: 97 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,192  |
Dancing to my macabre melody
Pools of blood washing over me Life draining away oh so slowly As I relive the latest tragedy This bloody rhapsody Is taking over me My body will soon be empty My demons will soon be set free Though my soul will never truely be As my blood line ends here with me The choice I made so willingly Is the course for you to be happy And that is when the irony Finally washes over me I lived my life for thee But in the end there was only me Just something I wrote awhile back and I wanted to share it |
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Sep 3 2004, 01:49 PM
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QUOTE(Thradrien_Blake @ Aug 24 2004, 6:47 PM) Great descriptions and wording... Very nice i agree...it is nice 
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InfamousOwen For you Aug 24 2004, 06:40 PM
sporadic Great descriptions and wording...
Very nice Aug 24 2004, 06:47 PM angel-roh lol it sounds like a lyric, if this is not a lyric... Aug 31 2004, 02:12 PM InfamousOwen It has a sing song kinda feel to it and it has a c... Aug 31 2004, 09:33 PM F1R3B4T yea teh rhyming part makes it sound lyrical ya kno... Sep 2 2004, 02:59 AM
MyVermilionPlague Yeah.
Good descriptions, and great wording.
I like... Sep 7 2004, 08:01 AM |
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