my untitled poem, that will remain untitled.. -_- |
 Sep 2 2004, 11:50 AM
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 !shobe!  Group: Member Posts: 664 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 5,912  |
I’m drowning although I’m not in the water.
I’m falling although I’m not in the air. I’m crying although I’m not in pain. Drowning in my fears Falling in my dreams Crying in my sleep The water is clear The air is fresh. I am tainted. |
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Sep 2 2004, 12:23 PM
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oh man that was a realli good poem.....
kinda has this "riddle" feel to u noe wat im sayin? |
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aud_chua my untitled poem Sep 2 2004, 11:50 AM
sugarcultluver yea i know what ur sayin^^ that poem is great... Sep 3 2004, 01:47 PM aud_chua thank you very much for showing your appreciation ... Sep 4 2004, 05:23 PM mSz_dOrk_anGeL Ohie I love it. Very nice. Discribes how I'm f... Sep 4 2004, 06:13 PM C.Lime.Jello. Hooray for dark poetry.
^_^ I like it. Sep 4 2004, 07:22 PM [X]poised its depressing. =/. perfect for my mood right now. Sep 4 2004, 07:26 PM
aud_chua i'm glad you guys like it. ^_^ Sep 5 2004, 04:01 PM |
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