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[RandomHero]

I wrote this a couple mins. ago and it all just kinda, came out. Im kinda embarrased posting this, but oh well. Anyone like it? Or does it just suck?

In one moment
the world can change
In one minute
lives can alter
The lightening thunders
all around
People's whispers
in the trees
As you watch through your window
you can see that

In one moment
the world can change
In one minute
lives will differ
As the rain comes
crashing down
You see me falling down

People talking in the wind
Raindrops falling
on the ground
Thunder screaming
in my ears
Everything changes
suddenly

In that moment
lives are changed
The thunder comes
crashing down
You can hear them
whipering
Through the darkness
all around, you

[sweetdreamsx3]

AWESOME! I mostly like the part where it starts off as..

In one moment
the world can change
In one minute
lives can alter

Those lines are wow. :P