no longer feeling..., a poem i wrote |
 Aug 23 2004, 04:55 PM
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I lay there
with waves of misery battering my already-tattered soul i felt so numb that your angry shouts and yells could sadden me no further although i never did anything you always came back to criticize and bury me with your once painful accusations but i always kept quiet paralyzed by my depression. ~me |
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Aug 24 2004, 03:08 PM
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i wrote this poem because all my mom does is yell and criticize....whenever i do something she always finds something to yell about. well im glad u liked my poem.
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curi0usbr0wneyes no longer feeling... Aug 23 2004, 04:55 PM
sweetdreamsx3 QUOTE(curi0usbr0wneyes @ Aug 23 2004, 4:55 PM... Aug 23 2004, 10:18 PM
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