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"you don't know me"
inthemudhole
post Jul 30 2004, 06:57 PM
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Okay. I wrote this poem for a poetry slam in school this year.. I got chosen to read mine at the slam. I came in 2nd place. So, yeah. This poem kinda sucks..

"You Don't Know Me"

I am not who you think I am,
I'm not one of you, I'm not one of them.

Why do you judge me? and
Why do you label me?

You just don't understand me,
You don't know the real me.

I doubt you know me for real,
and you absolutely don't know how I feel

You think I have no problems,
but that is where you are wrong.

As I sit here...alone..all alone..,
I'm thinking about you, and only you.

I think about you day and night,
I bet you didn't realize that.

I don't know how I got this way,
it's most likely because of you.

I sure hope you realize,
that I'm not who you think I am.

You don't know me.
 
 
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sweetdreamsx3
post Aug 23 2004, 10:35 PM
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Awesome!!! Do you mind if I post this in my xanga? lol I found two good poems so far. :D
 

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