my poem, im 14 dont laugh! |
 Aug 21 2004, 01:59 AM
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 im making a come back! woohoo  Group: Member Posts: 395 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,819  |
my poem is gonna be a short one....
i thought you were the one but i guess i was wrong i loved u with my heart but u didnt love me at all i thought we were lovers like all of them there but all u could say was "dont touch my hair!" despite all the bickering, i still love you so please dont ever leave me as i need u so if you hate me that much u might as well kill me because without you in my life im nothing but an ant i noe its supposed to have stanzas and stuff but i was lazy... this is just a short one... it was impromptu too!!! |
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Aug 23 2004, 10:20 PM
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Lol, you write better poems that I do when I was 14. >.< I suck at rhyming. It amazes me how people can come up with words easily.
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me_myself_andi2003 my poem Aug 21 2004, 01:59 AM
lhuvhurts thats really good
i like that Aug 22 2004, 02:34 AM me_myself_andi2003 well according to iq tests i have a good intelectu... Aug 24 2004, 02:35 AM sugarcubes nice
but y an ant?
not a smant?
not a pant?
not a ... Aug 24 2004, 05:44 PM
me_myself_andi2003 QUOTE(sugarcubes @ Aug 24 2004, 5:44 PM)nice
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