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 Aug 23 2004, 06:02 PM
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tell me wut you think of this poem thnx!
I knelt to pray but not for long, I had too much to do. I had to hurry and get to work for bills would soon be due. So I knelt and said a hurried prayer, And jumped up off my knees. My Christian duty was now done My soul could rest at ease. All day long I had no time To spread a word of cheer. No time to speak of Christ to friends, They'd laugh at me I'd fear. No time, no time, too much to do, That was my constant cry, No time to give to souls in need But at last the time, the time to die.
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Aug 23 2004, 06:04 PM
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its ok. there was some parts i didnt' get. good job, though
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surfraisin tell me wut you think Aug 23 2004, 06:02 PM
iheartsimba thats really good!
but you might wanna pu... Aug 23 2004, 06:03 PM waccoon This should be in Interests Aug 23 2004, 06:03 PM MyVermilionPlague It's nice!, but please post your next poem... Aug 23 2004, 06:04 PM surfraisin It's nice!, but please post your next poem... Aug 23 2004, 06:08 PM imafreakinazn hmm...interesting. it's pretty good. Aug 23 2004, 06:23 PM sweetdreamsx3 Yeah, there are some parts I don't get. Basica... Aug 23 2004, 06:57 PM
Devastation yes, this is the 5th time i have heard of this poe... Aug 23 2004, 08:58 PM |
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